E211 British Lit. to 1760 Paper, Spring 2015 – Alfred J. Drake's Academic Site

PAPER FOR ENGLISH 211 BRITISH LITERATURE TO 1760
CSU FULLERTON, SPRING 2015

PROMPTS AND INSTRUCTIONS FOR THE TERM PAPER

Topic/Argument Paragraph. Initially, a one-paragraph broad topic + specific argument description will be due by email on the date the syllabus page specifies. You can use this assignment to let me know what author/text you’re interested in. Once I have that information, I can return-email you some feedback that will help you develop a specific, manageable essay topic. You can also submit a full rough draft if you want more detailed advice.

Final Draft of Full Paper. The final draft of the full paper will be due as specified at the bottom of the syllabus page. I require emailed attachments in Microsoft Word (.doc or .docx are both fine) or a similar program. Along with your attachment, paste an inline copy into your email’s main body if you are worried that the attachment may not be readable by a computer using Windows 7 and Microsoft Office 2010/13. See the syllabus for the paper requirement’s value as a percentage of the course grade.

General Prompt. Choose one or (at most, and only if they’re relatively brief) two assigned texts and, focusing on issues you find relevant and manageable, write a 5-7 page essay specific in its initial thesis, easy to follow in structure, and clear and consistent in style. Proofread your grammar and check your argument carefully for soundness when you get to the final-draft stage (see links below for guides that can help you in that task). The paper should deal with an assigned text or texts in terms of their specifics – language, structure, themes, etc. – it should not proceed by way of vague generalities or try to cover so much that developing ideas fully becomes impossible.

Love and the Court. Examine one of the assigned readings (or two, if you would prefer to write a comparative essay) with regard to their views of court life in relation to erotic relations — how well (and by what means) do the lyric speakers or main characters deal with the complexities that arise?

The Christian Dimension. Examine the Christian dimension of any one or two assigned texts (aside from Paradise Lost): how do theological concerns about the soul’s progress, charitable conduct, sacred rites and responsibilities, and so forth shape or inform the text?

Politics in the Text. Consider the “politics” of any one or two assigned texts (fiction or non-fiction): how does the text represent the political realm — what key concepts and principles of action does it set forth regarding this dimension of life? Is the political realm represented as an ideal order, or as a flawed one where the practicalities of getting and keeping power trump personal honor and decency?

SPECIFIC TOPICS

Chaucer’s Wife of Bath. Explore the Wife of Bath’s strategy in her prologue for opposing the Church authorities who have written to women’s detriment about marriage and sexuality. Which, if any, of her arguments does Chaucer allow the most sway? How does the Wife’s Tale affect the claims she has already made in her prologue?

Milton’s Devil. It has been commonly said the Romantic Era that Milton’s devil is a more energetic character than his God or Christ. That may be true, but explore the subtleties of Milton’s task in representing God and Christ in Paradise Lost — how does he make the deity dramatically plausible? (An alternative would be to deal with Milton’s representation of Satan — how does he balance the need to “give the devil his due” while not allowing us to become too identified with the bad angel and his schemes?)

Literary Criticism and Theory. Before the semester’s end, we will have studied literary criticism by several of our authors (Sir Philip Sidney, Samuel Johnson, Alexander Pope, Addison and Steele). Choose any two of those authors, and explore the issues they address in common, dealing with the similarities and differences in position you find. Which author do you find most compelling as a critic or theorist, and why?

NOTE: I MAY POST SEVERAL MORE SPECIFIC PAPER TOPICS HERE LATER IN THE SEMESTER, BUT LIKE THE ABOVE, THEY WILL BE OPTIONAL — YOU ARE FREE TO DEVELOP YOUR OWN TOPIC.

Key Guides to Help with Style, Grammar and Analysis: <b>[http://www.ajdrake.com/wiki/tiki-

Formatting. Follow MLA (Modern Language Association) style — this means, mainly, that you must observe the following formatting rules:

1. Observe 1-inch margins (MS Word uses 1 1/2”; change with Word’s file menu Page Setup feature).

2. Double-space text and indented quotations alike — i.e. don’t single-space quotations.

3. Avoid extra paragraphing spaces or extra spaces anywhere (after title, etc.). Therefore, tab-indent the first line of regular paragraphs 1/2 inch rather than block-styling them, which would require extra spaces.

4. Indent long quotations of more than four lines from the left; there’s no need to indent from the right.

5. Number your essay’s pages in header at top right — use Word’s insert menu Page Numbers feature to do that. Then input your last name with Word’s view menu “header and footer” feature — the command “control/letter r” will right-justify the header text you type.

6. Include at top left on separate double-spaced lines your name, the instructor’s name, bare course title, and date. Then add your centered title. A typical paper would begin like this:

Simpson 1

Bart Simpson

Professor Montgomery Burns

English 101

25 December 2014

Why Should I Study English if I’m Never Going to England?!

7. Introduce and cite sources properly within your essay. See my Grammar Guide for the relevant conventions.

8. Offer a “works cited” list on the last page of your document even if an anthology is your only text. Again, see the Grammar Guide for the relevant conventions, or refer to a book every humanities major should have: The MLA Handbook for Writers of Research Papers. 6th. edition. Ed. Joseph Gibaldi. New York: MLA, 2003.

Rough Drafts (Optional). If you give me a rough draft or some portion of one, I will read it carefully and offer substantive comments. With regard to stylistic matters, I have a detailed online Grammar Guide, portions of which I include as autotexts with the MS Word Track Changes feature as I go through a draft. I will not simply “fix” rough drafts since that discourages students from doing their own editing. Self-expression and the desire to say something important are good reasons to write, but they alone do not make a person a good writer — that takes time and respect for the medium itself, including its formal conventions.

Research and “Works Cited.” For undergraduates, research is optional — the main thing is to attend closely to the assigned texts. If you like to do outside reading and work with theoretical approaches, that’s good, but this assignment is not technically a research paper. Even if you don’t incorporate outside research, you still need to include a separate Works Cited page at the end of the essay–that is because you will, of course, be citing at least one of the assigned texts. Use MLA guidelines for citing sources. As for graduates, your longer paper should incorporate at least some secondary material, but I leave the relative balance between primary and secondary material to your discretion.

Additional Guides. I have written many guides to help students with composing, editing, and polishing their essays. Please look over some of this site’s materials on writing — see the Resources/Guides section of your course menu, and click on “Writing Guides” to view the list.

ADVANCE DRAFT COMMENTS

Your essay doesn’t need to offer exhaustive commentary about the work or author chosen, and it doesn’t need to provide huge amounts of background information about history, the author’s life, and so forth. Instead, examine your text/s on the specific things (problems, issues, themes, etc.) you want to write about, and be willing to grapple directly and in some detail with the actual language of your chosen work. Try to write a paper that leads your readers towards genuine insights based on a patient, well-structured analysis of particular passages (and flexible points of comparison, for comparative essays). If your essay makes a reader feel like re-reading all or some of the literary work in question, you will have done your job well.

1) Thesis presentation in your first paragraph

The paper should go well beyond summarizing, though a little summarizing may be necessary as context for quotations and (in your first paragraph) just to explain what kind of story you are dealing with. The last several sentences of your first paragraph should explain what specific, manageable section of the text you will write about and why you are going to write about it. The “why” part should be more specific than “I want to explore certain characters’ actions and relationships, and later on I’ll tell you what the point of doing that was.” Your reader wants to know what you have already discovered and what you will, therefore, be explaining in detail later. That’s deductive structure, as illustrated in the sample paper: here’s my argument / now I’m citing and analyzing key passages to show how I arrived at it / now I am wrapping up the argument and reflecting on it.

Thesis Development. In the drafting stages of a deductive essay, the thesis in the first paragraph is often vague — more like a general topic than a specific argument. In a deductive essay, one states claims at the outset and then explores them; however, insights tend to develop inductively. That is, what the writer wants to say emerges only gradually, and becomes sharpest towards the end of the paper. The most efficient way to sharpen your first paragraph is to look over what you write in the middle and conclusion of your essay, and tie it all together into a few sentences that will serve as your thesis. That way, you can turn an inductive rough draft into a deductive final draft, and avoid allowing initially vague claims to get the better of you: unless handled with care, ideas quickly become traps.

Avoiding Generalities. Do not begin your first paragraph with filler such as, “Throughout history, people have fallen in love and written poetry.” That is a sign that the writer has little of substance to say. Also avoid literary appreciation filler such as “Ben Jonson’s plays are immortal.”

2) Argument structure and handling of quotations in the main section

The aim here is to offer sustained analysis of substantive quotations for which you have provided adequate context, and a conclusion that develops logically from the middle section without simply repeating your thesis. Ideally, there should not be only extremely brief quotations; showcasing a few longer passages and staying with them improves emphasis and structure. In a comparative paper, it’s usually best to deal with the texts in two solid blocks rather than to go back and forth between them several times.

3) Grammar and Style

Grammar and style. Key things are consistent verb tense use (present tense is usually best), active voice, and straightforward (not wordy or contorted) sentence structure. A Works Cited page should be included even if you only cite the assigned text/s, and MLA quotation formatting should be correct — see the sample paper available in Writing Guides. Failure to proofread and edit carefully in the final stages is a major factor in poor grades.

More thoughts on style. Avoid vague introductory language or empty praise of the author in question. A statement like “Throughout history so-and-so has been considered a great author” is padding. Get rid of sentences that function only as warm-up for specific analysis, somewhat like filler. Read your paper out loud, and you will get rid of many filler phrases and awkward constructions. We make mistakes in everyday speech, but at least we don’t say things like “objective consideration of contemporary phenomena necessitates the inevitable conclusion that success or failure in competitive activities exhibits no tendency to be commensurate with innate capacity.”

GRADES FOR THE FINAL DRAFT

If you earn a B+, an A-, or an A, that’s great. The A range grades mean that I really didn’t see major problems in your thesis, your handling of quotations and organization of the essay, or your grammar and style. I found your paper sophisticated and well written. If you earn a B+ or A-, that generally means your thesis was good but that the grammar and style issues kept the paper from being an outright “A.” I have marked up a few pages of your essay to indicate any problems with grammar and style, and possibly with minor thesis/content issues if I found any.

If you get a B, that’s good, too. A “B” is solid work, with some room for improvement both in terms of content (i.e. thesis presentation and inclusion/handling of quotations), and style/grammar. The paper markup should indicate some areas in need of work.

If you earn a B- or C+, that’s no catastrophe, but you can do better. Invariably this range of grades means that grammar/style problems slowed me down when I was reading your paper, even if they didn’t keep me from understanding the basic argument. Often additional problems were that the thesis remained somewhat general and that the paper didn’t make its case mainly through analysis of specific quotations.

If you do not get at least a C, the grade means that I saw some serious problems with both content/organization and with grammar/style, or that you simply didn’t meet the requirements for the paper — i.e. you turned in a one-pager with no textual analysis, or some such thing.

An F grade usually stems from plagiarized content, whether in part or in entirety, which is also grounds for failure in the course. Sources must always be documented.

PAPER FOR ENGLISH 211 BRITISH LITERATURE TO 1760CSU FULLERTON, SPRING 2015